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True Love
Once there was a young girl. Her name was Aldofina. She lived in Peru. One day she was out for a walk when she ran in to a very handsome young man, they’re eyes met. He was the first to speak. He said how sorry he was for running in to her, he asked what her name was and she told him. He said that his name was Diego. They started walking and while they walked they found out how much they had in common. They walked for hours. They were having so much fun that they forgot what time it was and Aldofina said good bye to Diego. They arranged a time when they could see each other again. As Aldofina walked home she was thinking about how much fun she had. She was so caught up in her thoughts that she didn’t know where she was. Suddenly, she heard a noise behind her, she looked, she saw nothing so she turned around and started running. She ran faster and faster, she was so scared then finally she saw lights so she ran for them. She finally reached town and she ran all the way home.
When she got home she told her mom about everything that had happened to her. Then she went to her room and talked to her little sister, Carmen, who’s 12, everything about Diego. Carmen was so excited for her sister. Just then their little sister and brother ran in. They’re names are Dominga and Domingo and they are twins. They are 6 years old. They wanted to hear what happened too. As she was telling the story they all fell asleep. The next day Aldofina went to see her best friend, Ofelia, she also told her about Diego. Then she told her that she had to go and meet Diego again. Since she was late she ran to where she was supposed to meet him. When she got there he was waiting. He greeted her with a “Hello Aldofina” Aldofina said “Hey Diego” and they started walking together. As they walked they found a little kitten. They named her Bama. They carried the kitten and said that they would keep her forever. As they were walking they talked some more. They watched the sun set and while
they were watching it Diego leaned over and kissed her. It was the most passionate kiss ever. After that he walked her home and she introduced him to her family. A couple months later he asked her to marry him and she said yes. They got married and had four darling children, two boys and two girls. Their names were Capac, Huayna, Valentina, and Ximena. They all lived happily ever after.

The End

15 Comments

  1. im_so_crazy_525 says:

    sorry that was to long 2 read

  2. bob08886 says:

    I have no clue. I read true love, saw how long it was & that was that.

  3. MoreOfMe says:

    NO. I did not even finished reading the story. For someone to like a literary, you must catch her attention or interest first by having a very strong initial presentation.

  4. Sylviaa_xox says:

    Yea I Like It But I Went Kinda Fast Like They Just Met They Kissed Four Months Later They Married And Had Four Kids …….I Do Like The Story It Was Really Nice But Went A Little Fast………… Good Luck

    *EDIT
    Dont Listen To People Who Say o.0.o.0.o.0. It Was Too Long So I Didn’t Read It

  5. Kent Dj says:

    No,i didn’t read too long…..

  6. britt22 says:

    needs more description
    and u go through it too fast.

  7. Aly S says:

    OOH!!! I THINK EVERY GIRL HOPES 4 A HAPPY ENDING LIKE THAT!!! I LUVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  8. SAMD010 says:

    Nope. It is just too long for YA.

  9. No Doubt says:

    Too lengthy. Couldn’t keep reading….

  10. salett. says:

    I read it all. Sorry. Its not too ..entertaining?
    Nothing exciting happened. I just remember a bunch of names.

  11. ABouDY d says:

    hey i read it all but you know what break your story down it finish quickly but you have a good writer spirit and let us hear from you again

  12. storm says:

    What a nice story. I hope you all live happily ever after!!!

  13. smart_mom96 says:

    it was cute..

  14. tote says:

    The story is short one, but written in a too long way. Good try anyway.

  15. Tommy B says:

    yes it was great

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